Shelby

*Hello! A few notes about my scene before I put it out here, this is the opening scene of what might be a short story but also might end up a novel, so the characters are quite complex in my mind a...

Hit me. https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/458020#overview_panel

Critique my girl Selene please? https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/458020

> > omgggg I love doing these so much I'm so glad I found this post, excuse me while I word vomit my angst all over this page. > > Selene is the smell of rain, the petrichor that hangs...

omgggg I love doing these so much I'm so glad I found this post, excuse me while I word vomit my angst all over this page. Selene is the smell of rain, the petrichor that hangs in the damp earth o...

@Periwinkle I love periwinkle too ;) thanks for the input! Putting in her relationship to her family is a really good idea because while I definitely have it in my head I kinda forget nobody else k...

@Jacque thank you!! I'm still working on fleshing out most of them. An investigative artist (I'm not actually sure if that's an actual term lol) is something that used to be popular during the rise...

@Caboose thanks for your input! The bit about the hair wasn't written that clearly as to what I was trying to get across so thanks for bringing that to my attention.

Pharaoh, Czar, Lord... okay that's all I can think of lol

Just a note, if you see the words "her power" or "her ability" in there without any precursor, she has the power of necromancy and there wasn't a super good place to put it.