If you could, would you do Eve? Eve Shasting
In the mood to critique your characters! (Closed)
@chgk3 Sure, sorry for taking so long!
For her hair style, describe it more! How long is it exactly? To her middle back? Pelvis? Somewhere else? does she have bangs? Is her hair textured or fine? And for her ears and tails, how does she hide them from humans? I'd image it would be pretty hard lol. Does she use hats? Explain!
I think you can give her a few more mannerisms! Most people have lots of mannerisms irl! The ones she has are okay, but I think you can give her more and expand on them. What does she do when shes angry? Sad? Excited? etc.
I think you can also give her some more flaws too. Most people have way more than 2 flaws! Flaws are super important in a character, they make them relatable. This makes it so the reader can connect with the character, which is what we want!
Expand on her personality section as well. I don't know much about her unless you tell me everything about her haha.
Wow, no background? Every character has a background! Thats what makes the character… well, the character! What was her childhood like? What was her relationship like with her parents? How did she do in school? Did she have friends? What were some things that made her the way she is?
good luck!