Do you mind doing Sky for me?

well, well, well, what do we have here. nice to meet you, Sky!

Overview - 84/100
Skyanna Windblossom. something about her name… brings back old memories…
I'm guessing she looks like a 16 year old and she's some kind of an immortal

Looks - 97/100
she has no skin tone? that's… unusual.
oh oh that's a lot of information. but wow. she must be beautiful.
oh so she has scales! but still, she would have some skin beneath them?
she's a DRAGON now I know! I'd move this field to the top of this section because without knowing it, I was kinda lost and confused. I didn't quite know whom I was reading about and how to imagine her!
I want to draw her so badly. it's a shame that I don't have time.

Nature - 78/100
I think talking fast is not a flaw
I advise you to think more thoroughly on her flaws. you can easily do that from deducing them from her backstory. if you have it written, read it again and try to get as many traits as you can.
22 books in one night? how many pages is that?
"Tragedy that shaped them"? does your every character has a tragedy? that's grim. maybe you could rename it to "Event that shaped them", so it doesn't sound like we're mourning or something (unless each of your has a tragedy. which I doubt. but I may be wrong).

Social - 89/100
seafood rocks
cannot imagine a dragon using a bow
oh she's a librarian! no wonder

History - 68/100
Windbreaker Manor sounds so cool
that bugs me, what exactly are Astras?
her backstory is nice, but I can't really see what will be going on in your story. there's no "teaser" of her further life. and I want to know what may happen next.
"Childhood happiness level", what an interesting field

Sky is definitely someone new for me. she looks gorgeous, has her place in you universe (I believe), but you need to work more on her pesonality. I see that you have her brief backstory ready, so it should be easy for you! good luck ^-^
average - 83/100

Sky is:
89% likely to be my friend
78% likely to by my lover
83% likely to be my party member
67% likely to be my enemy

Can you do Abi? She's sort of still in progress, and half the ghost/underworld stuff won't make sense, but I'd really appreciate a review! Thanks!

Info noted! I hope you'll find my ratings useful! sometimes a fresh look from a random person is all that you need

Overview - 81/100
Abi. I think I've heard this name somewhere.
her role is… round?

Looks - 78/100
I think facial hair is for moustache and beards. you can move this information to "Hair style"

Nature - 78/100
wait wait wait who's Mallory
Ünterworld is such a confusing name
her fields are curiously written
I think that everyone has some kind of a condition. tell me if I'm wrong
I get a feeling that this section could use some more information.

Social - 100/100
"The pen is mightier than the sword". but in the end the bearer's prudence is the key.

GOATS

I like your writing style as well as this section in general! everything is neat here, I really have no negative remarks!

History - 90/100
oh, I really wonder how developed her backstory is that you created a separate section for it

Spirits/ghosts known - 87/100
woah that's interesting
such a big spoiler in Frank's description! I genuinely was quite shocked when I read that
now I want to know more about ANUB1S, too

Quotes - 98/100
oh nice!
I want mooore

Backstory - 99/100
THIS GHOST IS UNSETTLINGLY DISTURBING
your writing is really unique! I feel like I'm reading a simple short story, not a block of raw information. bonus points!
I want to read the whole story. now.

Quirk - 85/100
hmm… interesting

Abi is an interesting character! I love her ability to communicate with ghosts! her story sounds unique and you made me want to get to know the other characters! she could use some more deep thought in her "Nature" section but overall she looks great!
average - 88/100

Abi is:
69% likely to be my friend
45% likely to by my lover
84% likely to be my party member
26% likely to be my enemy

howdyyyy! im new to this website, but I was wondering if you could review my oc, willow? i know shes very under developed, but could you maybe rate her so far? here she is - Invalid Character xoxo

oh, her page is private. you can make her public for other too see it next to the editing button. let me know when you make her ready!

howdyyyy! im new to this website, but I was wondering if you could review my oc, willow? i know shes very under developed, but could you maybe rate her so far? here she is - Invalid Character xoxo

oh, her page is private. you can make her public for other too see it next to the editing button. let me know when you make her ready!

Invalid Character oh my gosh i’m so sorry!

don't be! everything is fine. now that you solved the problem I can't wait to rate Willow!

Overview - 88/100
nothing to comment on here, next!

Looks - 76/100
smol!
she's a vampire! I haven't seen one in ages!

Nature - 70/100
good mannerisms!
I like that her traits are clearly listed, but I think they could be more elaborated. for example, one of her talents is "speed", but what kind exactly? or she's fearless, but "most of the time". what are the factors that make her feel fear?

Social - 79/100
a pocket watch? sounds interesting. how did she get it?

History - 40/100
oh, she has no backstory yet. I'm sure that when you write it, you'll figure out how to develop her personality more!

Notes - 80/100
it's great that you stated that you're working on her! remember to fill out her "Nature" section the same time as her backstory!

it was an interesting experience, rating a vampire character! vampires may seem kind of cliché, but I love to see how other authors make them unique with their backstories and traits! I hope I'll see you working on her well ^-^
average - 72/100

Willow is:
74% likely to be my friend
45% likely to by my lover
73% likely to be my party member
68% likely to be my enemy

I gots another one for you, Tomat!! Have fun with another one of my children, Fennec!

we meet again, MJ. I'm curious about what mysteries you've prepared for me.

Overview - 70/100
Fennec. I love fennecs. but do I love Fennec? that is the question.
is there a reason behind his nicknames?

Looks - 90/100
New Human! now I know what that means!
"Very angular and sharp features". hmmm… did you mean fox-like features? ^-^
crooked teeth. I relate.
and he even lives on the desert

Nature - 93/100
you already know how I feel about your "Nature" layout
"To finally get some peace". is it even rational to start loving a character just because of this line?
is independence really a flaw?
soup is

GOOD

Personality - 95/100
I think I am kinda a Fennec myself
Why Are You Making Me Sad With His Fears

Voice - 95/100
even a laugh description! I'm really impressed!
woah those languages sound so cool by the way I want to meet the Sun Goddess
very unique speaking patterns!

Social - 90/100

SOUP

wait but what kind of soup exactly
and what's Bane's trail mix?
lizards yes yes yes yes yes
oh Solellum also sounds cool
you know what? I love Fennec

History - 98/100
explanations of their last names! I never thought of doing that!
He Brings Me So Many Memories. I Am In Love.
you don't realize how he warms my soul. when I close my eyes and think about him, I see a beautiful desert with quiet Austin Wintory's songs in the background. majestic.
his whole aesthetics I'm gonna cry
aaaaaaaaaaa

Abilities/powers - 91/100
aww that's hot. that's real hot.

Inventory - 87/100
if he heats his hands, don't his gloves, like, melt or something? I hope he doesn't heat his hands while wearing them

Medical - 80/100
I've said this a few times that I like this field but I've never wondered what exactly each number represent. I interpreted it my own way but I'm not sure if it's the right one. unless there's no such thing as "the right way".

Family - 79/100
I AM ALSO IN LOVE WITH GEROME
wait is it possible for a salamander to live in a desert?

People - 81/100
now I only need to meet Bane and Rune

oh, rating your characters is always a pleasure. and Fennec? he's been an adventure. like a ride throughout the desert's ruined city. a journey to my memories with Austin Wintory, sand and snow. thank you. if you write your story, I'll try to be the one of the first readers, just to see how you've brought Fennec to life. of course, I'll be happy to see the others, too. but for now Fennec wins my heart. and I think it's safe to say that you're one of my favorite writers on this site.
average - 87/100

Fennec is:
97% likely to be my friend
81% likely to by my lover
79% likely to be my party member
53% likely to be my enemy

Could you please do Nick when you've got the time? He hasn't seen the light of day in ages

hi Nick

Overview - 70/100
hi Nicholas
aces, unite!

Looks - 87/100
woah his hair is so cool
he pretty

Nature - 95/100
oh, a gifted kid! I rarely see those
his motivation is only "relax"?
I think I've never met anyone who had no problems with slouching
everything is so neat that I don't have any negative remarks!
as an INTJ myself I agree that this personality type fits him. he really resembles me. I could copy 80% of this section and change his name to 'tomat' and everything would match my personality

Social - 87/100
knives!
stuffed animals are the only things that keep us sane

History - 70/100
you nailed all the important events, but I don't see clearly where his history is going. what happens next, or what may happen next? it's like his story is cut right before everything starts to warm up. try to create a 'trailer' of further story.

I like the clarity of his page. I also like him, maybe because I strongly relate to him. he seems like a nice character, but I don't really know what kind of a story he would participate in. you could try to elaborate his history, and that's it, really!
average - 82/100

Nick is:
80% likely to be my friend
73% likely to by my lover
45% likely to be my party member
64% likely to be my enemy

If you're up for it, could you please do Ezekiel? Ezekiel Arísen

oohhh, I love the name Ezekiel. it's so posh and proud, but not in a bad way. I'm curious about his personality, let's go.

Overview - 95/100
Arísen reminds me of rice
such interesting information right on the first section! you're doing it well!

Looks - 90/100
BIG THANK YOU FOR KILOGRAMS
I love the descriptions, they're so detailed!
oh they're perfect
there's so little written about his scars in comparison to his other marks. how did he get them? how does he feel about them?
he's so cool oh my

Nature - 90/100
ah, it's good it's good
and his talents! perfect descriptions!
hmm I wonder what does his mask look like
I'm in love with how everything is neatly written

Social - 99/100
Arcane Squad Member sounds so cool
now I want to be a member too
"Vermilion" that's exceptionally specific

History - 80/100
that's sad
such horrible parents
THIS IS NOT OKAY
even though I hate his parents, I love the impact they've created. Ezekiel has a well-written backstory, I wouldn't change a thing. the only thing that could be added is something that would interest the readers to read his further story. a 'trailer', a hook or something. foreshadow his next steps.

Magic - 100/100
woah that's really creative
yeah this section is perfect

Quotes - 98/100
💜

Ezekiel is such a well-developed character, I'm out of words! the amount of information in majority of his page's sections is just right! you sure know him well, he has nothing to hide from you. he's an ideal character, and I'd surely read about him more. keep up the good work!
average - 93/100

Ezekiel is:
67% likely to be my friend
55% likely to by my lover
89% likely to be my party member
74% likely to be my enemy

Could you do my other main character Myles? Myles or >]•/.

well hello there Myles. I wonder how chaotic you'll be in comparison to Discord

Overview - 90/100
"The Fool". interesting
"Mirror Guardian"? even more interesting
I'm interestingly interested. good job.

Looks - 93/100
his hair is "bushy and wild" but how long is it? I think it's one of the most important information about hair appearance
a mirror? that's really unique!
wow I didn't anticipate him to look like that. I'm in love with his design. I want to see him.

Nature - 89/100
why does "naïve" have an umlaut?
I wouldn't call "isolated and abandoned" flaws
hmm, every field has enough information, but could be elaborated. for example, why does he have these fears? how did he get corrupted (unless it's a spoiler)? what made him believe in these morals?

Social - 90/100
I want to know how this bracelet looks like
"Giraffe" that's quite random
ooh the Mirror Dagger is so cool and unique

History - 50/100
oh, there's so little information here. who are Stelara and the Black Hole Guardian? why can't he get out of the Mirror Realm? there's so many questions. I'd like to read more about his past, and what might happen to him in the future.

Myles is a simple character with a beautiful and unique design, in my opinion. there's still so much to uncover, so many traits to develop and a whole story to define. I hope you'll work on him more to make him an even better character!
average - 84/100

Myles is:
63% likely to be my friend
42% likely to by my lover
56% likely to be my party member
84% likely to be my enemy

could you look at Sarus? Sarus

Sarus. I assume it's an aquatic creature. I wonder how wrong I'll be

Overview - 87/100
yeah I was wrong
struggles to read names

Looks - 90/100
woah those names surely are confusing
let's put the names aside, overall his descriptions are easy to read. nothing to comment, going further!

Nature - 100/100
wow what an elaborated description
wow another elaborated description I'm impressed
okay I can safely say that this section is perfectly written, I really have no negative remarks

Social - 99/100
okay I love the gods of this religion, who cares that I only know their names
the "Reputation" field is so creative, I would never think of adding it!
this section is also perfectly written! in some places the names are quite confusing, but I'm sure that you know what lies behind them

History - 99/10
chef's kiss

Family - 95/100
oh I hope he will

I'm just… out of words that can express my love and respect for Sarus. he's such a well written character, and doesn't need any more improvement! I'm really proud of you, and you should be, too! I'd surely read his story to know more about his life and characters I've encountered during my reading. you did a great job. bows deeply
average - 95/100

Sarus is:
80% likely to be my friend
72% likely to by my lover
63% likely to be my party member
23% likely to be my enemy

why does "naïve" have an umlaut?

I’m not the owner of the character, but I do know that “naïve” is an alternate spelling; both it and “naive” are technically correct. :)

thanks for the explanation!

sorry if I'm too late but could you please do George, it would mean a lot to me if you can >_<

sorry, I've already closed this. but maybe in the future, when I'll be bored again, I'll check out and rate him ^-^

I'm back!
…

uh, I'll have to reread some of my ratings to remind myself how I was doing that ;-;

sorry if I'm too late but could you please do George, it would mean a lot to me if you can >_<

okay, I'm back to George! that was quite a long break, I hope you didn't die of curiosity or something

Overview - 89/100
George is… quite an ordinary name. don't worry, that's not bad. I think I just expected a more fantasy-ish name

Looks - 86/100
170 of what? I need a unit
ooh, a Dragotaur. I want to know more about this race and what it is exactly.
I'd read more about his appearance. maybe you could write more details about his face and body type

Nature - 78/100
I'd give him more mannerisms. what does he do when he's sad or afraid? what about his body language?
what a beautiful motivation!
ah, that's not a flaw. this would suit better as his mannerism. to define a character's flaws, determine his virtues first. if he's courageous, make him reckless, for example. I'm sure that with some thought you'll devise a well-balanced personality for him.

Social - 86/100
woah that's an interesting religion
should a girlfriend be a possession?

History - 64/100
that's a really tough punishment. how old was he when he flew below the clouds? if he was very young, shouldn't he be punished more lightly? how did his parents react? what did he do after being banned? there's still a lot of questions that should be answered.

I believe George is a wonderful character, I just think that some fields in his page lack good descriptions of his personality or history. don't hesitate to write everything you know! if there's some information that shouldn't be public, just say it. it will make me say 'ah. the sacred spoilers.' rather than 'why this character has such a poorly written background?' consider my words!
average - 81/100

George is:
72% likely to be my friend
54% likely to by my lover
78% likely to be my party member
58% likely to be my enemy