rating your characters averagely because I'm bored (thank you for participating!)

Silver (Invalid Character), I don't know if I've been here before but it was probably before I updated her.

hmm… I don't think I remember Silver. but maybe that's because I was rating all these people so much time ago. anyway, let's rate her!

Overview - 95/100
that IS a unique name! although it may be hard to remember
I don't quite get what's her role from this quote
is there a story behind her nicknames?
wow, it's my first time seeing character archetypes on someone's page, that's neat! I like that!

Appearance - 90/100
what a poetic description of the color of her hair
wait wait wait, "Asími"? is this her other name? why did it pop out of nowhere?
her eyes are so interesting
a demigod! even more interesting
scent of old paper and books. is it even possible to learn this power?
I love the descriptions! her voice and clothing are so well written. I don't need to give you any tips here

Nature - 99/100
perfect mannerisms
I NEED TO READ HER BACKSTORY
and to think that she's only 13
I am willing to give my love I've suppressed it for so long
I really have nothing more to say. this section has no major flaws. you could write more about her hobbies, but that's just a suggestion, not a necessity. you've covered all the things that should be here. good job!

Social - 89/100
and who's Mr Winston?
now I need to try these apples

History - 87/100
year 9718? humanity is doing fine I see
so that's her story. now I'm sad
does she have any further memories? this field looks like it isn't fully finished
now that I know her character arc I need to read the whole story

Silver is surely an interesting character. I'd love to read more about her. her nature is described so closely that I feel like I've known her since primary school, although her history needs some more work, but that's a good start! and now I'm out of compliments. just keep up the good work, and write your other characters as well as you wrote her!
average - 92/100

Silver is:
93% likely to be my friend
61% likely to by my lover
73% likely to be my party member
69% likely to be my enemy

Delilah Higashikata go nuts-

I will.

Overview - 90/100
Delilah is such a beautiful name it's like an ocean wave crashing into the shore ant then going back into the deep dark abyss of the water world like "De" (prepares to slap the beach) "Li" (slaps) "Lah" (retreats)

Looks - 91/100
where are the kgs and cms
p r e t t y
one day, in the far future, when the humanity will be no more, I will watch JoJo, every episode, and then and only then, I Will Understand Everything

Nature - 78/100
I'd like to see more mannerisms
no prejudices? I'm impressed
Stand User… Stand User… what…
I'd like to see more hobbies, too!
there's still so many things to write about her personality! what are her likes or dislikes? her goals or fears? this section is the most important, so don't be afraid to write everything you know!

Social - 84/100
california rolls

Family - 100/100
everything is good here!

History - 72/100
I DESIRE MORE EVENTS I WANT TO KNOW MORE

Stand info - 86/100
okay now I'll finally know what a Stand is
I've read this and I'm still not quite sure what a Stand is

I'll skip "Music" because I'm not familiar with any of these songs

I have nothing more to say! Delilah is a simple character, and seems finished, if you don't want to make her a super-complex-unique-perfect-hero-of-a-5000-page-book. but if you want to make her more likeable, write more about her personality and history!
average - 86/100

Delilah is:
64% likely to be my friend
38% likely to by my lover
70% likely to be my party member
63% likely to be my enemy

HECK YEAH THIS IS UP AGAIN

let’s roll >:)

nice to see you again, Tide! I'm curious what you've prepared for me this time ^-^

Overview - 90/100
Havits sounds so real. it's like a real surname. I also love the sound of "Monyi". what's interesting is that I read the first syllable with a French accent and the second with Chinese
I think I should skim through Clikor's page to have at least some basic knowledge about what I'm going into skims
OKAY I LOVE THE CREATIVITY OF CLIKOR
and now I'm interested in Volcanum, too
okay back to Monyi
what's a D-year? I didn't quite catch it in the Clikor's page

Looks - 98/100
everything is so detailed I love it
I need to see him

Nature - 100/100
…I really have nothing to say! everything is so detailed and well-written and clear and understandable, you have nothing to add!

History - 92/100
struggling to use Scratch on mobile so in the first link I can only play the song, but the second works just fine (I think)!
I'd be happy to read about him more!

Social - 98/100

CHEESE

I will defend him for him
I want to hear this language

wow, Monyi is such a well-developed character! even though he doesn't have a finished backstory I believe that you have it in your mind! I love all the details put into his appearance, and I'm impressed with the Clikor as well! I hope that I'll see your universe more in the future!
average - 96/100

Monyi is:
89% likely to be my friend
50% likely to by my lover
77% likely to be my party member
46% likely to be my enemy

YES this is open again! I didn't have the chance before to give you my boi Knox, but can you do him now?

_{Also, I'm @TheOpenerOfWays and @WepwawetWrites changed it twice bc I'm now obsessed with yet another ancient egyptian god…}

hello again! I'd be happy to rate Knox, too!

Overview - 89/100
so his other name is basically his actual name

Looks - 90/100
what exactly is a Physic?
oh I like it how he behaves with his insignia. I wonder what does it look like

Nature - 87/100
perfectly written mannerisms
perfect motivations
I'd write more flaws
his hobby sounds more like a mannerism. try to write about something he enjoys doing everyday. apart from this field, everything is fine!

Social - 94/100
"Same as Cass and Abigail". so, what religion? it's his page, so tell about him and not others
that's a specific color

Spirits/ghosts known - 99/100
"almost"? is there a reason?
but what's an Astral?

Quotes - 100/100
oh I love these

Backstory - 87/100
yes I'll finally know what Physics are. I think you should describe them earlier or make a reference mark
wow, I love seeing other people's creativity
is there any further backstory? maybe try to foreshadow what happens in your book (or whatever you're writing)

Knox is surely a well-developed character! I love seeing such elaborated personalities, it helps me relate to them more and understand them better. overall, there's nothing bad here! things that you can add to improve him are a little bit more information about his backstory and personality (but leave the mannerisms!), and correction of some minor mistakes ^-^
average - 92/100

Knox is:
78% likely to be my friend
65% likely to by my lover
98% likely to be my party member
34% likely to be my enemy

Oooh! Here's my baby, please rate her: K.T. (Katy Lynx)

hello! I don't know if this is interesting but I'm excited to rate the first character with a new page design!

Overview - 88/100
that's a clever name!
Green Bean I love this one
who's Zira. I need to know more about them.

Looks - 93/100
neon green? now I know where the Bean came from
alien? that's a surprise!
I like that you described her race more as well as her relationship with others
woah the hair is also a surprise

Nature - 80/100
I'd write more mannerisms
every major point here is covered. you've written already every important thing about her, but I'd write more. what are her virtues? does she have any particular goals?

History - 75/100
I see nothing to change here, I assume every major event is said. her history is rather spare, but it is enough, if there's nothing more to write about!

Social - 90/100
so Zira's her arch-enemy. interesting

Family - 100/100
okay I adopted Alberto

Sexuality - 98/100
nods with acknowledgement

Abilities -100/100
I like her powers!
I wonder how much she eats
I'm impressed with the thought you put into her abilities! the weaknesses are logical, and create a good counterweight. she really is a well-balanced hero!

Fears - 99/100
you don't have to change anything here, but personally I think this section would suit better under "Nature".

K.T. has some really good abilities, as I said. she's definitely ready to be put in a story. she could use some more development to make her seem like a real person, but if you're just beginning your plot, this information should be enough! I once again deeply bow to her abilities and I hope that you'll someday write a great story about her!
average - 91/100

K.T. is:
56% likely to be my friend
23% likely to by my lover
89% likely to be my party member
78% likely to be my enemy

Here’s Baney boi to rate

baney boi it sounds so cute

Overview - 98/100
Malice is an interesting surname
you've written about his name etymology, that's so cool! _{because I assume you misspelled "etymology"}
baney boiii
a hellhound? that's even more interesting

Looks - 95/100
there are kilograms there are feet there are inches but where are the centimeters
heterochromia is neat
wow the things that make him stand out are really imaginative! the claws, his face features - I love them
doesn't look like his smile is contagious but that's a big plus!
it would be nice if you also described his wolf form

Outfits - 100/100
that's a section I don't see often!
chef's kiss it's ideal

Nature - 100/100
this section is so developed. I haven't seen such detail in ages. I'm going to cry
strengths, weaknesses, middle ground - I love how you divided all three
wow this section is so perfect I'm out of compliments
I've watched the Salt and I am very grateful for this experience

Conditions - 100/100
it's my first time seeing someone lactose intolerant
I admire the detail put into this section as well!

Social - 96/100
I hope you'll write down the details of this religion someday

Family - how dare you/100
WHY IS CERBERUS DECEASED YOU MONSTER

Relationships - 98/100
ah. I like Slate.

History - 70/100
WELL THEN UN-LAZY YOURSELF
at least there's some major information here
I hope you won't forget about developing both these fields ^-^

Abilities - 100/100

perfect

shadow teleporting? I'm sensing Nico

I have no compliments left. Bane is such a developed, well-written character, that he makes my heart happy. whatever you're writing with him now, don't stop, because I want to see how you've described him in text. don't try to improve anything, because it's perfect as it is. but remember to finish his fields in history!
average - 95/100

Bane is:
78% likely to be my friend
26% likely to by my lover
91% likely to be my party member
67% likely to be my enemy

what a beautiful page, really ;-;

You can do Allison if you'd like. Allison Katrielle Atwood

of course I'd like

Overview - 98/100
okay first of all I love the name I'd name my child like this if I had one, and yes I would change my last name to Atwood if this was necessary

Looks - 88/100
not much detail here, nothing to comment

Nature - 77/100
to find her brother? we're getting deeper
not much information here, but enough to begin writing

Social - 80/100
oh, who's Tori?

History - 79/100
her brother's abduction? it should have made a great impact on her. maybe you could add how did she feel during this event?

hm, Allison seems like a pretty average character for a secondary protagonist. there's just so little information on her page. she definitely needs more development if she's going to be a major part of the plot. try to have a conversation with her! ask her thoroughly about her childhood, her passions, her plans for the future. I hope that as you write more of this story, you'll see how Allison changes and you'll write down more about her!
average - 84/100

Allison is:
66% likely to be my friend
34% likely to by my lover
50% likely to be my party member
42% likely to be my enemy

Could you do my baby Stormchaser? He's from the Monster Hunter series, none of my characters are human beings XD Invalid Character

IS IT A DRAGON IS IT A DRAGON

Overview - 88/100
Stormy sounds so cute ^-^

Looks - 73/100
that's a very specific name for a race. maybe you could describe it? what do the members look like or how do they differentiate from others? it would be nice to have this information here.
there's still so many things to write about! any identifying marks? weight? maybe length? there's enough to imagine him, but more information would definitely give me a clearer picture

Nature - 68/100
"fur turns a darker shade when angry" I really like this one a lot! it makes him very unique!
there isn't much information here either! write some examples of situations when his personality traits show up! define his virtues, his goals, and definitely more flaws! have a conversation, fill some questionaries - make him overflow with strengths and weaknesses resulting from them! I'm sure that with some work you'll be able to write about him more

Stormchaser definitely needs more development! keep in mind what I said, and find some time to write down everything you know about him! if he's a minor character, he won't need as much information as a protagonist, of course. but if he's still more important than some background characters, well-balanced strengths and weaknesses are always welcome
average - 76/100

Stormchaser is:
45% likely to be my friend
12% likely to by my lover
73% likely to be my party member
69% likely to be my enemy

@Femboy I think your page is private. could you let me know when you make it public? I'll get back to it as soon as I'll be able to! ^-^

NAME
Aric Matthias Summer

for this one I'll try to separate this information into page sections, if I may ^-^

Overview - 89/100
cat boi
why does everyone call him by his middle name?

Looks - 93/100
golden eyes!
he's a Mutant? I'd like to see more description of this race
maybe you could describe his scars better? are they on his face or body? how did he get them?

Nature - 69/100
he needs more mannerisms!
I think "Dyslexic" is more of a condition
prejudices are that unfounded feelings (I think mostly negative but I've seen people write positive as well) that one experiences toward certain people. for example, someone may be negatively prejudiced against a vegan they've met just because they were raised in a community that hates vegans. that's the easiest way I can put it

so, I see Aric needs more work! you definitely want to develop him to make him a realistic character, since he's a protagonist. I always say to have a deep conversation with you characters, because I think it's the best way to get to know them better. I also recommend doing questionaries, and writing their backgrounds. what was Aric's childhood like? how did he get to the point at which he's now? did he make any friends? did he face any reversals, since he's a Mutant? what about his family? do they support him? if you have no ideas now, then go back to writing the actual story. as you push the plot forward, you'll surely find something new about Aric as you go!
average - 84/100

Aric is:
63% likely to be my friend
22% likely to by my lover
50% likely to be my party member
45% likely to be my enemy

This looks so cool! Here’s my favorite character of mine heh. Thank you for any response in advance. Crystal Anne Carson

everything is working now!

Overview - 90/100
"it isn’t abruptly stated" I'm really curious about this part. what does it mean exactly?

Looks - 87/100
dead stare, lifeless eyes… is she me?
nothing much elaborated, but enough!

Nature - 73/100
"forced to have them"? that's an interesting way to put it
but that doesn't really tell me what her flaws are
if she's forced to do those, can you really call them a hobby?
woah that's a miserable character
I think you could work on her personality more. explain more precisely what do you mean by "forced" to do something. I hope that this will be answered in her background. and I'd like to see her actual flaws!

Social - 84/100
a gang-member? never seen such characters before
WHY ARE ANIMALS STUPID TO HER WHY
I'd like to see such elaborated descriptions in every field in "Nature" as they're written in "Job"! everything here answers my every question that I'd have about her job. it's an exemplary field!

History - 89/100
why did they ran from the services?
oh I hope she gets better

Crystal has a good backstory, but her personality could use some more work. since she's your favorite character, and also a protagonist, I believe that you'll have no problem with that! and try to write her fields just as you wrote her "Job" field, I'll say that again because you really defined it well!
average - 85/100

Crystal is:
43% likely to be my friend
8% likely to by my lover
76% likely to be my party member
97% likely to be my enemy