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What about evil humans who wants to destroy witches?

@CopperQueen

Well, ass far as the humans know, witches are only fairytales

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@Moxie group

Maybe the fae don’t like the witches? Like idk thinks there unnatural or something?

Also did Kerrigan know the other two witches before they all came together? Cause if not, maybe Terimane met Kerrigan along her way and brought the three of them together?

@CopperQueen

Also did Kerrigan know the other two witches before they all came together? Cause if not, maybe Terimane met Kerrigan along her way and brought the three of them together?

He didn't, wich gives me an

IDEA
What if Kerrigan is actually really lonely and Is Terimane comes along but she sticks to her old friend more than him once they all connect so all they talk about is memories and personal things and he feels so left out

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@Moxie group

Oh that’s so sad I love it

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Yo
My planes about to take off

@RedTheLoveless

Angsty Kerrigan… I love it.

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Angsty Kerrigan… I love it.

Yes~

@RedTheLoveless

And since by that time the group should have run into the human so both Kerrigan and the human are just kinda sitting alone and pouting in seprate corners

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They should become fRiEnDs

Ok should we summarize everything we have discussed?

@RedTheLoveless

We should probably turn all we talked about into a sort of organized timeline, along with a bit of a detailed summary/outline, yeah

@CopperQueen

Yes, but consider:

What if there was originally a fourth sibling who was way nicer and hung out with Lunos more, but they died in some kind of accident.
Now, I really want there to be a sense of danger even for the human, so what if there is a ritual/spell that sucks the power out of someone and the twins want to do it to a colorhair (AKA what they think the human is) but the process kills the subject.
The power can be used to do thigns like revive the dead, so it gives the twins hope.
They ask their lil sibling to get the human for them but Lunos (The lil sib) grows attatched and the twins confront him and now he has to choose between the two people he cares for the most for.

@RedTheLoveless

As a reader, that would sincerely tug at my heartstrings and I would want to take Lunos and hug him forever.

As a writer, YES TORTURE THAT POOR BEAN WITH SO MUCH ANGST

@CopperQueen

As a reader, that would sincerely tug at my heartstrings and I would want to take Lunos and hug him forever.
As a writer, YES TORTURE THAT POOR BEAN WITH SO MUCH ANGST

This is torture. I will stare at my screen just like "Lunos you better materialize right now so I can hug you

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Oh wonderful
You see
This is my plot, I make people fall in love with the cold villian and rejoice when he turns out to be good… Then, they cry becuase of the plot twist

MWAHAHAHAHA

@Huxly

Oh wonderful
You see
This is my plot, I make people fall in love with the cold villian and rejoice when he turns out to be good… Then, they cry becuase of the plot twist

MWAHAHAHAHA

;-;

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

Oh wonderful
You see
This is my plot, I make people fall in love with the cold villain and rejoice when he turns out to be good… Then, they cry because of the plot twist

MWAHAHAHAHA

Wonderful!

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ALSO!
I HAVE AN IDEA!
It's just a teensy idea but… What if Taramy is on her way to the dryer matt when she finds herself in this new world, she has a bag of dirty clothes on her back and a few tide pods in her pocket… When the people find her, they search her and find the bright little tide pods, then Taramy wakes up and the people are like: "Hah! We have searched you and found your food!" And Taramy sees the pods and is like: "NO, NO YOU CAN'T EAT THAT! IT'S POISONOUS!"

i freaking hated the tide pod challenge

@RedTheLoveless

ALSO!
I HAVE AN IDEA!
It's just a teensy idea but… What if Taramy is on her way to the dryer matt when she finds herself in this new world, she has a bag of dirty clothes on her back and a few tide pods in her pocket… When the people find her, they search her and find the bright little tide pods, then Taramy wakes up and the people are like: "Hah! We have searched you and found your food!" And Taramy sees the pods and is like: "NO, NO YOU CAN'T EAT THAT! IT'S POISONOUS!"

But if the others (fae folk and creatures) do eat it, it doesn't kill them. Just makes them high as shit for several hours before passing out.

Maybe it has a "herb" or ingredient that isnt found in their world easily or doesnt exist in their world.

also does the world have a name?

@Huxly

also does the world have a name?

Maybe Prodinus? I literally just searched up fantastic and adventure in Latin and mixed them together.

@CopperQueen

You are not bringing the tide pod challenge into this dramatic heart tugging story xD
Maybe something but not literal tide pods oh my god you freaking memers

Also yeah Prodinus works, wemay change it later but I like prodinus

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But, but the memeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

@CopperQueen

Memes are great but guys
we can't just have an unrelated "Someone tried to eat a tidepod" in the middle of a scene
I agree it would be extremely funny tho xD
We should make a small comic or something were that happens because it fits well with the charahters at hand

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

We need the memeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees

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Memes are great but guys
we can't just have an unrelated "Someone tried to eat a tidepod" in the middle of a scene
I agree it would be extremely funny tho xD
We should make a small comic or something were that happens because it fits well with the charahters at hand

Once we have the characters designs completed, I'll start drawing us a little animation.

@The-N-U-T-Cracker

I can help design characters since I'm being pretty worthless at the moment

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I have Luno's character design pretty finalized but…