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@the-void-galactic public

“What is it?”
“Your mom”
“Haha ok”
“No literally”

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@the-void-galactic public

Anyway, I must now perish. See y’all after school

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@im-with-stoopid pets

Thinking about some of my old writing and it HURTS
My beta reader was my best friend who co-authored with me, and we were both in, like, 5th grade

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oh good grief. 10 years ago I wrote a 50k word thing that was just… 10 chapters of ANGST.
I cringe so bad anytime i have to reference it to write my better stuff now, so i feel that

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@im-with-stoopid pets

Thinking about some of my old writing and it HURTS
My beta reader was my best friend who co-authored with me, and we were both in, like, 5th grade

It was Pokémon, I think, but we both didn't like how they "needed" trainers, so we had a group of wild Pokémon just living in a treehouse and throwing rocks at people
And her team was all Eevee-evolutions because of course they were

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XD that sounds about right. 5th grade tho, thats pretty advanced

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@FRANKtheTritoposaur group

I went to school in these heels that i got from goodwill and are a tiny bit to small for me (They still fit i just prefer larger shoes).

IT WAS A MISTAKE

my feet hurtttttt ;-;

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Thinking about some of my old writing and it HURTS
My beta reader was my best friend who co-authored with me, and we were both in, like, 5th grade

It was Pokémon, I think, but we both didn't like how they "needed" trainers, so we had a group of wild Pokémon just living in a treehouse and throwing rocks at people
And her team was all Eevee-evolutions because of course they were

makes me think of a webcomic that followed exclusively eeveelutions. It was pretty good, I only stopped reading it cuz the site it was on got destoryed

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@im-with-stoopid pets

oh good grief. I wrote a 50k word thing that was just… 10 chapters of ANGST.
I cringe so bad anytime i have to reference it to write my better stuff now, so i feel that

Oh dear-
I think my worst project was this massive thing about wolves vs werewolves
None of the characters were introduced, there was five plots happening at the same time, at some point a god appeared and gave the protag superpowers only to never show up again-
Truly a train wreck-

But hey, wouldn't be here today without it, so there's that

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oh good grief. I wrote a 50k word thing that was just… 10 chapters of ANGST.
I cringe so bad anytime i have to reference it to write my better stuff now, so i feel that

Oh dear-
I think my worst project was this massive thing about wolves vs werewolves
None of the characters were introduced, there was five plots happening at the same time, at some point a god appeared and gave the protag superpowers only to never show up again-
Truly a train wreck-

But hey, wouldn't be here today without it, so there's that

That last part is very valid. I often wonder how the big writers of our time look back on their early stuff

also. 50K words and I was just setting up the main plotline XD i dont know if I even knew the word 'pacing' at that point in my life

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@im-with-stoopid pets

oh good grief. I wrote a 50k word thing that was just… 10 chapters of ANGST.
I cringe so bad anytime i have to reference it to write my better stuff now, so i feel that

Oh dear-
I think my worst project was this massive thing about wolves vs werewolves
None of the characters were introduced, there was five plots happening at the same time, at some point a god appeared and gave the protag superpowers only to never show up again-
Truly a train wreck-

But hey, wouldn't be here today without it, so there's that

That last part is very valid. I often wonder how the big writers of our time look back on their early stuff

also. 50K words and I was just setting up the main plotline XD i dont know if I even knew the word 'pacing' at that point in my life

Oof-
Idk about word count, but I hit page 60-something on college-ruled paper, so there's that
Can't believe I went from planning the story as I wrote it to obsessively planning every single plot point and theme and town and building and little people in those buildings and those little peoples' families and

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also. 50K words and I was just setting up the main plotline XD i dont know if I even knew the word 'pacing' at that point in my life

Oof-
Idk about word count, but I hit page 60-something on college-ruled paper, so there's that
Can't believe I went from planning the story as I wrote it to obsessively planning every single plot point and theme and town and building and little people in those buildings and those little peoples' families and

oh for sure. I got waaaay too into the details as well.
also, college-ruled paper… you were hand-writing this??? :O That's…. impressive, i gotta say

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@im-with-stoopid pets

also. 50K words and I was just setting up the main plotline XD i dont know if I even knew the word 'pacing' at that point in my life

Oof-
Idk about word count, but I hit page 60-something on college-ruled paper, so there's that
Can't believe I went from planning the story as I wrote it to obsessively planning every single plot point and theme and town and building and little people in those buildings and those little peoples' families and

oh for sure. I got waaaay too into the details as well.
also, college-ruled paper… you were hand-writing this??? :O That's…. impressive, i gotta say

Writing a story in class instead of paying attention, yeah
Decently young when I was writing, must've been, like, 13-ish?

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oh for sure. I got waaaay too into the details as well.
also, college-ruled paper… you were hand-writing this??? :O That's…. impressive, i gotta say

Writing a story in class instead of paying attention, yeah
Decently young when I was writing, must've been, like, 13-ish?

right, you said 5th grade ish. so young. Which makes it More impressive.
also. i dont think i could write while someone else is talking. i doodled a lot, but never could write stuff out. thats a level of focus I dont possess

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@FRANKtheTritoposaur group

THE ARMY AND MARINES AND OTHER MILATTARY PPL ARE AT MY SCHOOL RECRUITUNG. HELP

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@Eli-the-transboi group

THE ARMY AND MARINES AND OTHER MILATTARY PPL ARE AT MY SCHOOL RECRUITUNG. HELP

O.o

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@FRANKtheTritoposaur group

One dude was doing pull ups. It was weird

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@Eli-the-transboi group

One dude was doing pull ups. It was weird

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@FRANKtheTritoposaur group

My friend is a 6'2 guy and hes gonna go troll them. Pray for him

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@im-with-stoopid pets

because that's so much better

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@Eli-the-transboi group

because that's so much better

XD

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@spacebluelily language

because that's so much better

XD

realistically, you'd probably get very sick if you ended up eating the rat. So, stealing is probably the better option

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@spacebluelily language

and no I will not stay safe , I'll go to go into the road and dance around like a crazy person 👺👺 /j

Been there, done that, not as much fun as you think it would be

is it cause of honking and the yelling and the possibility of being ran over

business

and no I will not stay safe , I'll go to go into the road and dance around like a crazy person 👺👺 /j

Been there, done that, not as much fun as you think it would be

is it cause of honking and the yelling and the possibility of being ran over

Surprisingly no, it's just not as exhilarating as hoped.

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@spacebluelily language

and no I will not stay safe , I'll go to go into the road and dance around like a crazy person 👺👺 /j

Been there, done that, not as much fun as you think it would be

is it cause of honking and the yelling and the possibility of being ran over

Surprisingly no, it's just not as exhilarating as hoped.

😦
welp throws plans down the drain

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and no I will not stay safe , I'll go to go into the road and dance around like a crazy person 👺👺 /j

Been there, done that, not as much fun as you think it would be

is it cause of honking and the yelling and the possibility of being ran over

Surprisingly no, it's just not as exhilarating as hoped.

😦
welp throws plans down the drain

How about the highway?

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@spacebluelily language

and no I will not stay safe , I'll go to go into the road and dance around like a crazy person 👺👺 /j

Been there, done that, not as much fun as you think it would be

is it cause of honking and the yelling and the possibility of being ran over

Surprisingly no, it's just not as exhilarating as hoped.

😦
welp throws plans down the drain

How about the highway?

the highway is like thirty minutes away from where i currently am :(

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Shame.

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@spacebluelily language

very much shame

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@FRANKtheTritoposaur group

I'm reading the best book ever rn