Dying! At the dinner table. BAND MEMBERS ONLY!

or we could start from scratch

I have the rap hold on.

Rap:

I looked at my plate of food, so far away, why can't I touch it,
why can't I taste it? My stomach aches as I look at it, drool hanging from my mouth,
it seems like my world is fading as I see it. I can't go.
I'm sitting there hanging to my chains (chains, chains.)
Watching as my world fades (fades, fades)
My hunger will not obey (obey, obey.)
Theres only ONE thing to say

Im hungry.

ah yes here

Wow, that's…wow

XDD

Brava. I…woah. I'm speechless, honestly

Should that be the chorus?

Yeah, I can't deny it
Even if I tried to fight it
I sat through class
through thick and thin
Ignoring the complaints within
I tell myself I can move on
But my stomach groans from dusk till dawn

(Idk just puttin that out there)

Brava. I…woah. I'm speechless, honestly

Wow really? I just made that up on the go.

Should that be the chorus?

Yeah, I can't deny it
Even if I tried to fight it
I sat through class
through thick and thin
Ignoring the complaints within
I tell myself I can move on
But my stomach groans in a hungry yawn

(Idk just puttin that out there)

Maybe that should be the bridge.

(Yeah sure!)

Should that be the chorus?

Yeah, I can't deny it
Even if I tried to fight it
I sat through class
through thick and thin
Ignoring the complaints within
I tell myself I can move on
But my stomach groans in a hungry yawn

(Idk just puttin that out there)

For the italicized line I read it quickly and thought it said my stomach groans from dusk till dawn XD

(Oh that's actually a good idea I'll change that!)

(Hmm my first idea as a band member XD)

(Dusk till dawn the song?)

Okay, so here is all the song we have written so far, correct me if the placing is wrong:

"I'm Hungry" by Dying! At the Dinner Table

All I want to do is eat, eat, eat,
But then I choke on my asparagus
Eat, eat, eat
But I don't like asparagus.

Why, why must you torture me,
when all i wanna do is eat cake.

Do I even know how to bake cake?
I don't know how to bake cake
I should learn how to bake cake
Today

I CAN'T SEEM TO FIND WHAT I WANT
I CHECK THE CUPBOARDS AGAIN
THERE'S NOTHING TO FLAUNT
IT'S ALL THE SAME AS IT WAS BEFORE
I GROAN TO MYSELF AS I SLAM THE DOOR

MY STOMACH RUMBLES AS I LOOK AT THE TABLE,
NO CAKE TO EAT, ONLY ASPARAGUS!
I'M HUNGRY
AND THERE'S NOTHING TO EAT
I'M HUNGRY
THERE IS NO CAKE TO EAT

I BANG THE TABLE AND SIGH IN DEFEAT
WHY CAN'T I FIND SOMETHING GOOD TO EAT?
ASPARAGUS SEEMS TO BE MY FATE
IT'S THE ONLY THING THAT IS LEFT ON MY PLATE

I GRIT MY TEETH
PREPARE MYSELF
I FEEL THE URGE TO RESTOCK THE SHELF
I REMIND MYSELF IF I STRAY
THERE WOULD BE NO WAY TO PAY

drum solo

EAT IT
MY MIND COMMANDS ME NOW
I CROSS MY ARMS AND FURROW MY BROW

somehow creates music using mashed potatoes
mostly sounding like this: plop plop plippity plop

I WILL NOT TAKE THE SMALL GREEN STICK
IT'S MUCH TOO TOUGH AND THE SKIN IS THICK

I looked at my plate of food, so far away, why can't I touch it,
why can't I taste it? My stomach aches as I look at it, drool hanging from my mouth,
it seems like my world is fading as I see it. I can't go.
I'm sitting there hanging to my chains (chains, chains.)
Watching as my world fades (fades, fades)
My hunger will not obey (obey, obey.)
Theres only ONE thing to say

I'm hungry.

Yeah, I can't deny it
Even if I tried to fight it
I sat through class
through thick and thin
Ignoring the complaints within
I tell myself I can move on
But my stomach groans from dusk till dawn.

oh yeah that's good stuff

I would correct you put its hard without a beat and music. Were problably going to add more though.

I just kinda have this constant sense of rhythm in my head (not as cool as it sounds) So It just….it flows….so nice….

I guess we'll make the beat from scratch then.

Yup

Whenever I sing the first line my brain automatically makes it into that one kids song about eating apples and bananas XD Idk why

Is it ok if we can edit the lyrics because its not really flowing correctly?

That's true

Yep.

I'll be off and on today. I have a lot of quizzes and tests, then all county practice after school.

Herlo

Salutations

So whats going on?

I hath no clue…

Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo want to help me with editing the lyrics?