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poetry sharing!!

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@croccin-champagne

"Open up to me." One cries,
as they push duct tape
over your mouth…
but you don't struggle

Dude, I've never seen it put into words like that.

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"Open up to me." One cries,
as they push duct tape
over your mouth…
but you don't struggle

Dude, I've never seen it put into words like that.

I'm taking that as a compliment. (im really sorry about the rp, ill get to it soon im just going through some stressful things :))

@ravens

whoa
that was very powerful

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whoa
that was very powerful

Thank you.

@croccin-champagne

It totally is a compliment my dude. Also, don' worry about it. Take your time!

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It totally is a compliment my dude. Also, don' worry about it. Take your time!

Thank youuuuuuuuuu

@ravens

whoa
that was very powerful

Thank you.

<3

@croccin-champagne

A Home Among The Stars

I have been told before
That I look at the stars with "longing"
Like they are a family I once knew

The word Hiraeth means longing
For a home you cannot have
Or never knew(In this life, at least.)

Do you think they correlate, these things?
A word I can't forget
And a sky I find myself lost in, constantly?

I guess it makes you wonder
If it's anything more than coincidence
But I'll never really know
Not for a bit, at least.

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How are you so good Croccy???

@croccin-champagne

I mean I'm not, but thank

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You are! ^D^

@ravens

that's beautiful! you're really talented. all of you are!

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@soupnana group

A Haiku

I'm very hungry
My stomach is so empty
Please give me some food

@ravens

mood

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@kittycalyx group

me rn bc i’ve got 8 minutes till lunch

@Periwinkle_

A Haiku about IXL

I can't stand this site
one right, your grade crawls up slow
one wrong, it dies fast.

@croccin-champagne

lmao

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@kittycalyx group

BRUH I HATED IXL OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE BANE OF MY ELEMENTARY SCHOOL EXISTENCE

@Periwinkle_

We have to do it in high school, it ABSOLUTELY SUCKS

@Bandito

The hospital asked
Should the body be gassed
Before I say goodbye?
Such an odd thing to say
My sunny day
Should I even reply?
Now why do I weep
When you're just asleep
On the fourth of July?

(listen to Fourth of July by Sufjan Stevens if you want to cry..)

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I have found my people…

Hey, does anyone have any funny poetry? Not that the more serious stuff is bad, I just am wondering since I'm trying to write a humorous poem for a magazine.

@croccin-champagne

I don't think so, but I could try writing something funny?

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Yeah, I'd just like general advice I guess. I dunno.

@Relsey-TheElder

Yeah, I'd just like general advice I guess. I dunno.

I've written 'funny poems' before really just think of something random and write a poem about it, I've already shared my one on boredom but i can post it again if you want

@Periwinkle_

I have found my people…

Hey, does anyone have any funny poetry? Not that the more serious stuff is bad, I just am wondering since I'm trying to write a humorous poem for a magazine.

I wrote a silly poem about IXL on another poetry thread

@Bandito

(well this isn't really funny but I need to write music for it but I don't know how any suggestions?)

Ruler

(chorus)
I ran through the mountains down to the red sea
I called to the waves and said oh, oh, oh, I make myself the king
I said oh, oh, oh, I make myself the king

(verse 1)
They still only see who they thought I would be
I told them who I knew I was going to be
Now I kicked through the sand, I was breaking their chains
They’d given me more than enough of their pain
I called to the great predators of the air
I searched for the beasts still asleep in their lairs
I found them too numb to even try to move
The ocean was frozen, my fears had been proved

I ran through the mountains down to the red sea
I called to the waves and said oh, oh, oh, I make myself the king
I said oh, oh, oh, I make myself the king

(verse 2)
Looking for smoke and a still-water sea
When they found one, replaced it with their dreams
I hated their songs and dry waves and fake care
I knocked down their dreams clothed in my nightmare
Rebellion woke up, taking my small hand
Whispered in my ears ways to the promised land
I took one more step and I fell to the waves
Knowing there were still people left to be saved

I ran through the mountains down to the red sea
I called to the waves and said oh, oh, oh, I make myself the king
I said oh, oh, oh, I make myself the king

(verse 3)
They wrapped round my neck, moaning my first name
Gripping my face and crying without shame
I shut my eyes tight so I could see the crown
Floating above as they dragged me deep down
My new name was sounded, they came to a halt
A note and we were found without a fault
I pulled off their hands, surfacing in the storm
It passed with a nod and the water was warm

(bridge)
I said oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh

I’d run through the mountains down to the red sea
I swam in the waves and made myself their king
I said oh, oh, oh, I make myself the king
Oh, oh, oh
Oh, oh, oh
I crown myself my king

@ravens

I don't know how to write music for a song, sorry :(
But that's really good!

@croccin-champagne

I do not as well, but boy oh boy. I can see how bits of it could possibly sound tho

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I haven't been here for a while, hi!

@ravens

hi!