Things You Want LESS Of In Books

I don't remember lol I haven't read it in years but I remember how mad that scene made me

Because amy (the most wonderful woman in the world) was like 'I'll go skating alone!' like an idiot

"If it's blue, you'll fall through", that's the saying right?

YES I AGREE
Also I'm just now realizing I have characters named Joan/Jo, Meg, and amy (the most wonderful woman in the world), and one who I don't write with but use for random stuff named Beth lmao. Although Meg and Joan are the only 2 in the same universe.

Didn't she and Laurie just go on 1 picnic and then BAM proposal?

She was a hecking child
She was like 10

Okay, dear people that haven't learned how to drive
Please don't write about driving. It's really obvious that you can't drive

And? You can just research how to. I can't drive but that doesn't mean I can't write about a road trip

Yeah, I had an explanation typed and then I accidentally refreshed and it got deleted. I mean when they talk about what the character is doing or noticing and it seems like that when you're watching but once you start driving or go to drivers ed or something, you can tell that's not what they were doing or thinking about. Like, a character shouldn't be exhausted and be daydreaming about their boyfriend and listening to music and maybe be tipsy and still be able to drive properly

Also jynnie aren't you learning to drive rn? (Not trying to sound rude, just trying to put together pieces)

No, I'm not taking driver's ed until I'm 18.

Seems important

How does he not think someone would want an alpaca?!

I want a llama so I can train it to spit on the people I don't like

Wait I just realized that means you can rent an alpaca (duh how did I not realize that) and I wanna know what people do with them