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"Uh, hey? Can we talk?"(O/O) (OPEN)

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A girl controls the weather in her neighborhood with her emotions. When her heart gets broken, no one sees the sun for months. It rains heavily nearly every day. After a bit, the people in her neighborhood get so fed up with the dreary weather, they try to convince her ex-boyfriend to apologize.

@KalamariCakes

Y e s

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A w e s o m e !

@KalamariCakes

May i

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Of course!

@KalamariCakes

What should my character be like? Whats their role?

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I was hoping to be the girl, if that's alright.

Basically, the girl and the guy have been in a relationship for a long time. The weather was clear and sunny and warm for the town and stuff. So the people were happy right? And then the guy decided to breakup with her, and she was completely heartbroken over it, so the weather became really bad. Like, awful rain and wind and huge, dark clouds. The people figured out that she was controlling the weather with her emotions a little while back, and they thought the feelings would just blow over, but it's been a couple months and the rain had hardly let up. So now they go find the guy and convince him to go apologize to her.

@KalamariCakes

Okedoke! So, do we start at the beginning of their relationship and climb up to that, or do we start smack dab in the climax?

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Let's start at the beginning. Shall I get a template?

@KalamariCakes

Yes please!

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Just something quick! ;)

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Personality:
Other:

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Name: Kallie Terrace
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance: https://www.pinterest.com/pin/107664247328419235/
Personality: innocent, gullible, incredibly sweet and loveable; not known to be very dramatic
Other: controls the weather with her emotions

@KalamariCakes

Name: Atlas Shearwaters
Age: 17
Gender: M
Appearance: black hair, reaches down to his jawline. Sits in a brushed-back style. Dark brown, almost black eyes, thin lips and a crooked smile. Roman nose. Normally wears darker colors. Likes aviator sunglasses. Kind of lanky in the limbs.
Personality: cocky, stubborn, and quiet. Not one to make a scene, but is nothing close to a pacifist—but also isn't an asshole. Gets frustrated easily, but never expresses it: just a tight-lipped, silent expression. Physically affectionate.
Other: went through an anime phase when he was 12. Older sister still teases him for it

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Nice! Would you want to start with them meeting?

@KalamariCakes

Sure!

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(Alright, here we go!)

A gentle breeze swirled around the ankles of Kallie Terrace as she walked to school. The sky was a humble blue, which reflected the feelings of the girl. She waved at several of her neighbors and smiled to the world.

@KalamariCakes

Two doors down, one of her dark-clad classmates was starting his car. He looked pissed as all get, waking up so early.

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What's his name? Alta? Atal? No, that's not right… She approached his house with every passing step. "Hello!" she called to him, waving happily.

@KalamariCakes

He peeked hs head up over the car hood, where he had found a dead squirrel lodged up in there in a search for warmth. "Wha?"

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"I said, hello!" she repeated with a smile.

@KalamariCakes

"Hello…?" He replied, as if confused by her.

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"Yeah! Hi, hello, hey. A greeting!" She tilted her head. "Is something wrong with your car?"

@KalamariCakes

"Yeah," the kid grunted, "Squirrel.. died in it." He replied slowly.

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She blinked her wide eyes. "Oh… You could walk with me if you wanted to."

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She blinked her wide eyes. "Oh… You could walk with me if you wanted to."

@KalamariCakes

He sighed quietly, shuffling his backpack on his shoulders, "I suppose, sure."

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She smiled again. "Alright!" The sun peeked out from behind a cloud as she did so.

@KalamariCakes

He pushed hair from his eyes, and slid polarized aviator sunglasses over his bumped nose.

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"I like your sunglasses!" she complimented, waiting for him politely.

@KalamariCakes

"Thanks," he walked towards her.