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Jaciel slowly stands up, her form getting shorter, until she was half the height of the form she'd been wearing and all of her dimensions were thinner. Her hair was now medium length, black and choppy, swept over one of her dark purple eyes. Her outfit was now all blacks and deep purples, consisting of an oversized hoody and black leggings with worn black flats. She walks up to the roof and sits down next to Ala.

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Ala was quiet for a moment before " I know who you are…. Jaciel, what didn't you say anything to me. "

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Jaciel looks over, then takes a breath.

"And who am I? I'm nobody to you now. You've made that quite clear. So who am I?" she replies.

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"I used to love you… " she spoke softly not looking away from the buildings that were below them

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"Used to. . ." Jaciel murmurs. "But that doesn't mean anything to a goddess of hell. You. . . I did my best, you know. Not to let myself fall again. God, I tried. But I did anyways. I knew that you wouldn't feel the way you used to. I was, am, content with that. But that doesn't mean it hurts any less."

She was crying, with a sad smile on her face.

"Did you know that I've never even touched this form since I lost you? It was, is, too painful emotionally for me. I've never sang that song since I last sang it to you, when you bled your last in my arms."

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"How long, how long did you know it was me?" Ala didn't answer anything she'd said she was to angry "how long have you known my passed but refused to tell me?! "

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"Since the beggining. You would have dismissed me, what I had to say." she whispers.

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"I would have listened. "

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Jaciel laughs sadly.

"I doubt that. Your attitude and actions towards me and what I have to say have been spiteful and full of hate."

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"Because you act like a spoiled brat half the time you realize this don't you? "

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"'Spoiled brat?' Do you even know what that means? A spoiled brat is someone who thinks only about theirself. That's you, Ala, not me."

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"That is not me. " she growled

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"Yes it is. I have been doing my best to not be selfish. But all you've done is complain and whine about how you hate me and wish you were on your own again, and how you wish I would shut up. You have been a hateful, angry brat. You have been acting like an entitled toddler." Jaciel snaps.

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"Well maybe the whole claiming you own me had something to do with it jaciel! Did you ever think of that you wanted me so bad it didn't matter what I wanted you just forced yourself on me! "

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"You owed me. And you had trespassed. You would have claimed me too, Ala!"

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"Wrong, I would have let you die if I found you in that church. it's who I am jaciel I've been this way for thousands of years you can't beat it out of me I'm to far gone nowI can't feel emotions anymore you were foolish to even believe I could. "

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Jaciel slaps Ala. Tears hit the blacktop of the roof.

"You're right. I was a fool to think I loved you." she says, voice quiet and tearstained.

She wanted Ala to be hurt by what she was saying. "I thought I loved you. But the person that had my love is an empty vessel now. I should have killed you myself."

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She fell silent when jaciel slapped her for a moment before speaking again "I was wishing for death something sort of freedom I thought I was going to get what I wanted I that church until you showed up! You took away the one thing I had been wishing for since the moment I woke up in hell!"

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Jaciel's eyes widen in shock, then they close.

"Fine." she whispers, stabbing Ala in the chest, puncturing her heart.

"Die then."

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The world was still for a moment she could feel the blade in her chest but the pain never followed it was as if the world stopped completely she stared a jaciel for a moment not really understanding what had just happened to her she grasped the woman's wrist attached to hand that had stabbed her to insure she didn't fall of the building "*j-jaciel… " the pain caught up to her as she sat there gasping for air she could feel the blood begin to rise up her throat causing her to choke which made her grip on her wrist tighten

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Jaciel looks sad as she looks at Ala.

"You wanted death. You won't be in pain for long. It will fade, just like you. . ." she says, her voice catching as she says "you."

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It only took a few moments before ala's grip on jaciel loosened and her eyes began to close

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Jaciel starts singing softly.

"Away you shall go, to return again. . . Life and love will come again. . . Like the winds and sun, we'll meet again. . ."

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Ala fell against jaciel the only thing registering was her singing her vision went black and within seconds she lay against the angel dead

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Jaciel stops her singing.

It's rude to leave the knife there. she thinks to herself, gently removing the knife from Ala's chest.

She lifts up Ala's corpse and jumps from the top of the building, landing in a grove of cypress trees. She buries the lifeless body of her love.

-Several years later-

Jaciel was watching a person. A human woman. A spark of hope appears in her eyes.

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Ala walled down the street scrolling through her phone as she listened to music she still looked the same as before not as mean though

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Ala. she thinks to herself, starting to reach out before stopping herself.

She starts to turn away before she hears people start calling out to the oblivious woman. She turns to see Ala walk into the street. A car was speeding and honked loudly.

Jaciel swears and leaps forward, knocking the woman out of the way.

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Ala didn't hear anyone yelling the only thing that makes her look up was Someone running at her that's when she noticed the car "holy shit! you just saved my life-" she looked up at the woman a look of gratitude on her face "i-i didn't even notice.. "

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Jaciel waves away the "thank you."

"It's fine." she smiles, wincing as she moves her wrist.

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Ala shood up and glanced over at at jaciel "are you alright you didn't hurt yourself right? "