Penstorm

Hey, thanks so much for the reply!! I have been working on the story and have gotten little bit further and I would loved to have someone bounce ideas off of. I hadnt been on in a while b/c I start...

Not at all, I would love to have any feedback. Work has been crazy so I haven't updated recently but I have a break coming up so I will jump back into it. If you have any suggestions I would love t...

@Riorlyne, Thank you SO much for all that you did. I opened the googledocs looking for your feedback and there was nothing listed so I don't know if I am looking at it right. Thank you for the fee...

It sounds really interesting - but without knowing your purpose of the story it is hard to give a critique. But I will say that in your description, you stated that Dean Young bought the Bunker but...

Thank you so much for your time. I kind of paused writing to work out some kinks in my worldbuilding.

I have a lot information about my universe down and I know where I want to go with the story I just need some feedback about my chapters. Any and all feedback is welcomed. Thank you!!! Go to Scene...

Having it land in 2020 is a good idea - although if you are trying to be more futuristic you might want to push the date to something far out like 3020?- as far as when the story starts it depends...

I wanted to create a language for my story as well but then I had to remember that I would not be writing paragraphs in that language but instead use key words or phrases to show distinction betwee...

I would also add that someone with PTSD does not do well with loud sounds; so if the princess and knight are on the run or hiding then the sound of soldiers when send her into a panic. Think of sol...

What about a person has gone beyond that and whatever they speak becomes materialized and those that use the written words are trying to find a way to stop them from taking over.... or doing a Jack...