Character Analysis- sup, give my your character and I'll critique it: I'll analyze every single one! (closed- go away)

Could you critique mine? His name is Michael. Be as harsh as you possibly can.

umm.. I can't go it it I need a link

Whenever you have time, I would love if you could critique my protagonist, Carter Williams

Please and thank you!

Also, if possible, my antagonist as well, Lucifer

Not the main character but one of the POV Characters from my series. Lmk what you think.

Torrah, the Lion of Khala

Hey
Life update:
My puppy was killed in front of me and I moved halfway across my county

So yeah