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If you wouldn't mind helping me critique my antag Lucifer https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/433157 In his details, I mention Carter a few times, that's my Protag, the link to him under "a...

@darling-velocipede Thanks for the critique, i appreciate it! Gabriel has been my struggle for a while now, trying to come up with the road between point A to B. I have him envisioned in my head in...

It would be awesome if you would be willing to critique my protag Carter https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/402590 And my antag Lucifer https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/433157 It ...

It would be awesome if you would be willing to critique my protag Carter https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/402590 And my antag Lucifer https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/433157 It ...

Whenever you have time, I would love if you could critique my protagonist, Carter Williams https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/402590 Please and thank you! Also, if possible, my antagonis...

If you wouldn't mind taking a look at my protagonist, Carter, I would greatly appreciate it https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/402590

I'll be honest, I really like your character, she seems really interesting. The only things I'm not really following are her mannerisms. They don't seem to line up with the rest of her personality...

Thank you, these are some good points. I hadn't thought much about how he caring nature might have developed. My overall goal includes 6 original characters of different backgrounds coming togethe...

As someone who has been working on a series for close to a decade now without fully finishing a book, I can tell you that my main problem is trying to connect everything too early. Similar to what ...

I'd like to see if anyone can look at my character and see what I'm missing, or what I can improve. I have a couple areas I know I'm struggling with but it'd be great to hear what everyone else thi...