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What is the worst thing you've done to your characters?

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@Bananapudding

Daniel had an abortion as a result of his occupation as a prostitute.

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Can't remember if I mentioned him on here, but Huxley was manipulated and abused for 10 years and has PTSD from watching his father's slow, painful hanging at the ripe old age of 9.

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Lori. Wtaf. GRIMDARK much?

Lmao what can I say? To see what your characters are truly made out of, you must break them.

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Lori, you have no chill.

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Lori. Wtaf. GRIMDARK much?

"See this kitten? Isn't it cute? Don't you looOOoove it? BAM! It's dead now! You should feel bad!"

(Terrible Writing Advice!)

But yeah, Grimdark. Much Grimdark. Do your characters have any redeeming qualities?

Oh yeah, definitely. I'd go into detail but my space bar is still broken and it's a major pain in the arse copying and pasting all these spaces lol

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Lori, you have no chill.

This is true

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LMAO WTF @lori
even those horrible back stories beat mine on my Jakey

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LMAO WTF @lori
even those horrible back stories beat mine on my Jakey

uwu
I have even more, should I share those too?

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Yes… I'm scared but yes.

Lori. Wtaf. GRIMDARK much?

Lmao what can I say? To see what your characters are truly made out of, you must break them.

Yeah but that’s like teaching a child to swim by chucking em over Niagara Falls.

@Bananapudding

I mean, if the child is truly strong, it'll figure it out.. Otherwise..

LOL.

@Infinite

I once had one of my characters burn to death in an apocolypse-type-thing. yay

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I have a character that had a goal and he was so close to reaching that goal and it was the sweetest noblest everyone wanted him to reach that goal. And he was so close to achieving it, and I kill him.

@Infinite

oof

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btw, how do you do that thing where it shows what someone else said? I'm kinda new at this.

three dots in the upper right hand corner then quote. or just put a '>' in front of a line.

Zuri's mom is a powerful Siren Blood but she has no powers and all her friends are very powerful.

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Lori. Wtaf. GRIMDARK much?

Lmao what can I say? To see what your characters are truly made out of, you must break them.

Yeah but that’s like teaching a child to swim by chucking em over Niagara Falls.

wait, that's not normal?

Lori. Wtaf. GRIMDARK much?

Lmao what can I say? To see what your characters are truly made out of, you must break them.

Yeah but that’s like teaching a child to swim by chucking em over Niagara Falls.

wait, that's not normal?

Ha.

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Alright bet so i got another another here-
Abarat: my lil stuck up princey here is a jerk for a reason. He technically never had parents? He was actually born from water (it was a science experiment don't ask). The royal family, yea, they took him in, but?? They never actually treated him as kin. They only took him in bc he was going to grow up to be very powerful. My poor baby here, his brain was messed up bc something went wrong with the experiment. The royal family gave zero (0) fucks. So, Abarat suffered mentally for most of his childhood (that doesn't sound bad but it actually is and it can really damage someone long-term, so shush) and he grew to never truly love anyone bc they probably didn't love him anyway.
In his "teenage years", he was cold and distant until he met a certain woman (who was a just an ordinary traveler). He knew she was different cause she always spoke her mind. So, he began to open up to her and trust her. She tried to do the same. Abarat was finally starting to heal mentally (and physically) and beginning to learn about trust and love. But not for long. His dear friend, who impacted him so greatly, killed herself. She left a letter to him, and him alone. When Abarat walked into her room and saw her hanging at first he was confused and in some serious denial. When he cut the rope and checked for signs of life, however, he lost all hope and his heart shattered into a million pieces. Poor baby found the letter too, and he's vowed to never read it (spoiler: he does-) bc he doesn't wanna relive that. He has vowed to never get close to anyone so he doesn't suffer again.
His is not as bad as Tyler/ Kore's and Kani's backstories but hey. It's still bad.

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I probably torture my characters a bit by having them constantly be misgendered. It's my little bit of saltiness to add, I guess, I'm kinda making a statement about how being trans or NB is valid while also adding plot points, but idk.

@Bananapudding

Sasuke is named after the anime character

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Robin saw their closest 2 friends encased in stone for centuries and was then kicked out of the courts and made to wander the woods, so they couldn't even see the statues. They do get their revenge and free the two friends, but it takes a while.

Lori you obsessed with pain and suffering.

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Lori you obsessed with pain and suffering.

Thanks hon! I actually do that for a reason uwu

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Queen Adalia has her husband killed right in front of her and her only child dragged off and presumably killed (she's not), all because some citizens were upset that the king poured more efforts into finding a cure for her illness than for general repairs kingdomwide. Also she has a tuberculosis-like disease that will most likely kill her before she turns 50 and is basically the puppet queen for her own kingdom after Sole takes over.

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Vivian's closest friend is killed right in front of her, and then her other closest friend/boyfriend is whipped and left to bleed to death, although he survives. When she gains her ability to see the dead, she can see her friend but because of the way she died, she can't really speak to her (the friend was beheaded, so she can't really talk, you know?)

@Bananapudding

Kyoko technically being the reincarnation of a demonic dictator's former human self

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Oleander is possessed by an ancient being and forced to do some truly horrible things while being fully conscious of it but unable to fight back. Also the being is immune to iron and ash, but Oleander's not, which leads to to the being forcing him to use weapons that slowly poison him. And when the being is forced out, it drains all of the color from his hair and eyes, along with his magic. And he's wracked with guilt from what he's done, and Ophelia's hunting him with every intent to burn him alive because she doesn't know he was possessed. Yay!

@Relsey-TheElder

OOf that's sad, i think the worst I've done is murder my characters brother in font of her, and then have her watch as the rest her com unity was whipped out slowly while she looked on unable to help.