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Let's Talk The Birds & The Bees >>> (Mature Rating - For Authors Serious About Sensitive Scenes)

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OOOOOOOOOF

XD

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It'll be obvious in the situation that it is consensual. Just make sure to write the scene before the deed as intense and passionate as you can. You want that build up of emotion to let the reader know "oh shit this is about to happen."

Also add in a lot of physical touch in the scene beforehand. ie: female protag begins to storm away in a huff and male protag grabs her wrist and pulls her back (gently) so they can finish their argument or whatever. A grabs B's shoulders. etc. etc. It adds that extra flare of intensity and passion.

The deed itself shouldnt be rough per se, but with elements of diction that are more 'war like' than passionate. Hard and soft. You have to find that balance. ie: Their lips clashed together with bruising strength. Their bodies coming together like lightning, a hard strike that shattered the ground in pure light.

Afterward, have them be cold towards each other. one immediately leaves after dressing, promising it will never happen again.

Stuff like that.

Beatrice and Benedick

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I was gone for just a few hours… shoulda expected that tbh. And thanks for the advice, @FaeEris!

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Beatrice and Benedick

wheezes
I guess they are like that. XD

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I was gone for just a few hours… shoulda expected that tbh. And thanks for the advice, @FaeEris!

You got it! :)

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Beatrice and Benedick

wheezes
I guess they are like that. XD

;)

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Y'all are crazy. Must be why I fit in on this site so well lol.

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We are creatively sane, thank you very much.

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Beatrice and Benedick

wheezes
I guess they are like that. XD

Han and Leia?

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Beatrice and Benedick

wheezes
I guess they are like that. XD

Han and Leia?

Nahhhhh. They may be into some kinky stuff but definitely not hate sex.

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Beatrice and Benedick

wheezes
I guess they are like that. XD

Han and Leia?

Nahhhhh. They may be into some kinky stuff but definitely not hate sex.

Fair point. Bea and Ben, however, are probably into kinky stuff and have had hate sex at least once.'
So have Oberon and Titania.

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OH FOR SURE OBERON AND TITANIA.
Are you kidding?
Pan has joined at least a hundred times.

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Retelling I want:
Midsummer Night's Dream, but Demetrius/Lysander/Helena/Hermia are all bi and end up in a poly relationship.

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OH FOR SURE OBERON AND TITANIA.
Are you kidding?
Pan has joined at least a hundred times.

I mean, if you're immortal and have lived for centuries, you probably have tried everything possible in the bedroom. Or the forest floor.

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I'm fucking dead
I love assuming what the sex life of OG couples is like.

Romeo and Juliet? Boring, fast, missionary
Hamlet and Ophelia? Intense, kinda wild, but passionate
Luke and Mara Jade? 100% Intense kinky freaky.

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I'm fucking dead
I love assuming what the sex life of OG couples is like.

Romeo and Juliet? Boring, fast, missionary
Hamlet and Ophelia? Intense, kinda wild, but passionate
Luke and Mara Jade? 100% Intense kinky freaky.

I always thought Luke was ace, but I agree with the others.

Mercutio and Benvolio? Exact opposite of Jules and Romeo
Padme and Anakin? Did you see the dress she wore at the lake house? Kinky.

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Sherlock and Watson? Totally wild. Surprisingly, Sherlock is a bottom.

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The real question is:
Is Nick Bottom a top or a bottom?

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Sherlock and Watson? Totally wild. Surprisingly, Sherlock is a bottom.

wheezes because it’s true

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The real question is:
Is Nick Bottom a top or a bottom?

oooof great question

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Sherlock and Watson? Totally wild. Surprisingly, Sherlock is a bottom.

wheezes because it’s true

right?

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The real question is:
Is Nick Bottom a top or a bottom?

oooof great question

I mean, Something Rotten! has a full song called 'Bottom's Gonna Be On Top', so take that how you will.

Okay does your virginity when you first cum or when you first get the pen stick it in? (im asking a a girl. like is a pen went in the vagloosh)

(Does your virginity go away when)

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I think it's when the pee pee enters

cus not every girl cums every sexual encounter

i don't think

Thats what I was thinking but my friend thought otherwise.

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Well they're stupid

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nah jk