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@Reigning4aDay Thank you so much! That was all really helpful. I'll definitely keep the tips in mind while writing as well as editing her character.

I would love if someone could critique these two characters for me. Be as harsh as you can be!! https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/725858

@"M.W.Poel" Thank you!! I do use these notes unless I feel like I've already explained something to the best of my ability because I can always go back and change something. When I write, if some...

@"M.W.Poel" I would love that, thank you!

@"M.W.Poel" @"walter" I tried to make adjustments based on your suggestions. I noticed that I do have a problem with coming up with "whys" and making my characters a little too cliche, so I am rea...

I would love if someone could critique these two characters for me. Be as harsh as you can be!! Let me know if something is wrong with the links :\ Holland: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/charac...

@Syguy20132 Thank you so much! That was all very helpful. I probably should have been clearer on the weights and heights. Since these are characters that will be in a series, they're going to gr...

@Syguy20132 Thanks so much!

Rosalie: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/623876 Kaden: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/660265 Liam: https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/623868 Julianna: https://www.notebook....

@emiliaisthename Thanks so much for your critique. I'm going to try my hardest to work at what you've told me to work on, and hopefully, I can figure out how to develop them a bit more. Thanks ag...