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@Riorlyne Thank you so much for the advice! Looking at your comments reinforces what I think is problematic in my writing, but I've just never known how to fix it. As for information, I do find I...

A lot of my novel is centered on political conflicts and their results, but I find a lot of my own experiences from modern day issues (particularly social) are seeping into my story. I don’t want t...

@Wry_Wyvern It's not entirely vital, but it makes the most sense? He's special because he discovered a way to make weapons harnessing a certain kind of magic people hadn't been able to tap into be...

Face red in embarrassment, the squire stormed out of the armory. Without a sword how would he avenge his slaughtered family?

Okay this question really excites me because I love dance (though I can't dance myself) so this might get a little rambly, BUT: You could probably have your martial art/ dance magic separated in...

I write because I have many stories in my head (my dreams always come out in coherent stories as well) and no one will ever be able to write them the way I know they need to be written

I'm trying to come up with names for my characters using conlangs I've created, but I feel like they sound ridiculous, and I was just wondering if there's a point where anyone starts to believe it ...

Revolution and war change people

I have one I've been developing for a while and one I came up with literally last night: Three people are fatefully connected through war but diverge in extreme ways and Saintly girl seeks for...

Hello, if you're still open, could you please look at one of my prologues? This is more of a first draft than anything, as it's a rewrite. I see some issues, but I'd like a second opinion. Thank yo...